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PostSubject: Naraku deitachi (Hollow)    Naraku deitachi (Hollow)  EmptySat Sep 15, 2012 12:50 am

Name: Naraku Deitachi
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male.
Weapons: Long jagged claws. Has two long curved structures that stick out from both of his elbows. Once pulled out they are curved like boomerangs an are very sharp along the outer half. Other then that he has a long bone fragment tail with razor sharp points going along his tail spaced out like thorns on a rose.

Personality: Only little is known about his personality. An what is known is that he craves the blood of all creatures including hollows. Being a blood thirsty monster he has struck fear in all other hollows. The only other personality known about him is that once his hunger is satisfied he become calm but still has a loud mouth when he is in a battle with someone. Being cocky of his Abilites he thinks he can take out any creature that steps in his way.

Physical Appearance: A solid whit bone structer covers his whole body with a smooth slick surface besides his tall which is covered with sharp white throns. Having two curved spikes coming from his elbows. Standing on his hind legs he reachs about 6'2 with a slender body. His hands an feet being paws with sharp claws hidden within them. Even though a bone structer covers the human face he once had it now resembles a wolf withthe long snout an pointy ears. His eyes being icy blue with a snake like slit within the center of them.

Bio: Only recalling a little of his past while he was human. He could remember that his former life was filled with blood an pain of others. Only beige 23 at the time he had lived a life of crime an murder. Killing over 300 victims he had earned the name New reaper. He would hunt down his victims an slowly cut them from piece to piece only wanting to fill their warm thick blood against his skin. Which was the only thing that made him smile the most. Upon turning 24 his final victim was a lord in which would make him that more feared by the people. But with mistakes being made others had followed the blood stained leafs to his hide out deep in a cave. Not wasting anytime they quickly tied him down an slowly killed him. Smiling at them as he took his final breath he warned them he would be back an far more powerful.

Centuries had passed since his death an he had entered the hollow world becoming one him self. Having his mind completely lost he gave into his hunger an devoured other hollows becoming stronger. Finally evolving he gladly took on stronger enemies devouring them as he did. Rejoicing as many more years had passed an he evolved once more becoming the creature he is now. He now stalks between the human world an the hollow world for stronger victims.

Ability: howl of destruction.

Techinque: by raising his spiritual pressure to it's full power his howl would grow louder causing more destruction in a wider range. The howl itself could kill humans an low rank hollows if caugh under something. But mainly just knocks enemis out of the area if caught in it.

Form: Adjuchas

Role play sample:

As darkness falls upon Heuco Mundo an stronger Hollows begin to rise from their dark holes they call a home. Icy blue eyes would slowly open within a nearby cave, the eyes showing blood lust an hunger within them. Raising to his paws he would stretch out opening his large snout yawning showing all his sharp fangs. His white bone structured body glinting in what little light that was shining down. His bone structured tail swaying back an forth as he slowly walked out from the cave he rested in. Bones lined the ground around it of hollows that he had feasted upon. Stepping upon a skull the bones would crush downwards making a loud crunching sound. Not looking down he would shake his head from side so side as he closed his eyes for about 2 minutes. After the minutes had passed his icy blue eyes would snap back open as a scent of a hollow passed his nose. Pushing off the ground with his back paws he would shoot forward as sand burst into the air from where he once stood. Running through the never ending desert on the moonless night only his white bone structured body could be seen along with the bones structured wolfs head. Running through the desert in what seemed as a blurr to most hollows he would run up a sand dune an then push off at the top of it sending himself into the air.

Landing on the ground with a loud thud in front of a group of hollows that were feeding upon another hollow he would startle them. The largest of the group which even towered over Naraku stood up fully looking at him. Blood lust could be seen within Narakus icy blue eyes as he looked upon them "Ahhh more food." his two toned voice breaking the what seemed like the never ending silence that had befallen the group of hollows. As the smallest of the group stood an begin to run, Naraku would quickly react an shot forward with his back paws. Reaching the hollow before it took it's third step Narakus tail would shot outwards an wrap around the hollow sinking it's thorns into it's flesh. Blood would leak from the wounds as the Narakus tail slowly gripped him more. The others stood there watching an knew they stood no chance in running away from him. The 2nd to largest would stand an charge at Naraku with it's massive fist pulled back ready to strike. With no second thought Narakus tail would spin around the hollow like a chainsaws blade an then rip the hollow apart that it held. As the hollow reached him an swung his fist Naraku would charge towards it's fist with his right elbow held out using the curved spike that sticks out of his elbow like a sword. As it slammed into the hollows fist it would slice through it as he continued to press forward all the way up his arm splitting it in two like a banana pill. As he reached the shoulder of the hollow he would quickly turn to his left as his other elbow came around an sliced off the hollows head ending it's life an more blood would stain the sand. The lifeless body would fall to the sand as the head of the hollow roles towards the others. It's eyes still wide open with fear struck eyes.

His icy blue eyes would then look upon the others as he snarled at the last two. Seeing the fear in their eyes he would push off the ground once more with his back paws an his speed seemed much like a sonido as he would then appear rising up towards the largest one with his jaws open aimed for his throat. Apon reaching his jaws would snap close at the hollows throat latching on to it. Before a second thought he would yank back ripping it's throat out. The hollows hand would rise to it's throat as he gagged on it's own blood. Finally falling to his knees first holding his throat as his eyes rolled into the back of his head an fell face first into the sand lifeless. Landing on the ground in front of the last hollow with the largest ones throat in his jaws he would quickly scarf it down. Seeing Naraku busy the hollow would turn an begin to run out of pure fear. Swallowing the Hollows throat Naraku would watch the hollow run in fear an only smirk. Leaning his head down to the left side towards the spike he would latch his teeth onto it an slowly pull it out until it was fully released. The curved spike now looked like a boomerang. Shifting his head tithe side he would quickly turn it back releasing the bone fragment an it now hurled towards the hollow. Upon reaching it, the bone fragment would slam into it's back an then slice all the way through coming out it's chest an then curving heading back towards Naraku. With little effort he would reach his head out an catch it within his jaws an then put it back within his elbow. Turning away from the corpse below the hill now he would walk back over towards the others an beginto rip the flesh from their bones as blood covered his snout. After 20 long minutes he would complete his meal an walk over to the top of the large sand dune an sat down. Looking out across the land with his icy blue eyes wondering when he shall really be tested.


Statistics:
Rank/level - MDR-2
Hankou - 9
Reiryoku - 9
Hakudo - 10
Seijuu - 10
Bukijuu - 10
Hoho - 12
Points awarded:
Total points: 60




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PostSubject: Re: Naraku deitachi (Hollow)    Naraku deitachi (Hollow)  EmptySat Sep 15, 2012 2:44 am

Ready to be graded an I think this is my best yet lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Naraku deitachi (Hollow)    Naraku deitachi (Hollow)  EmptySat Sep 15, 2012 10:29 am

It is better than your last one, but still, it's a hollow. I can't really give it more than an ADP-0. o.o ADP-0 gets 60 points.



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PostSubject: Re: Naraku deitachi (Hollow)    Naraku deitachi (Hollow)  EmptySun Sep 16, 2012 2:47 am

Its ready to be moved hash
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