Aeon Jinchiro

Name
Aeon Jinchirou

Nickname
Thunder Dragon

Age
166

• Died at age 15.
  
• Spent 112 years in Soul Society until the present day.

Squad
11

Rank
Captain

Gender
Male

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Weaponry

• Ryugu Style Combat
  
  The Ryugu Style of hand-to-hand combat is a form that Aeon has created and spent over 100 years perfecting. Utilizing quick and powerful hand to hand strikes, complete with a nigh-unbreakable stance; the Ryugu style is capable of dishing out quick attacks and powerful combinations. The drawback of the style are the lack of recovery and agility-based movement, which limits the fluidity for those who only use the base form.
  
  Aeon alleviates this by utilizing his own speed. However, due to the basis of the techniques; he is not capable of utilizing the full strength of his hand-to-hand attacks without staying rigid and still.

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Personality
Aeon's personality can be best described as intense. His base emotions always involve that of a calculating and cool fighter. What he firmly believes in is an ideal of what he calls an "absolute aura"; or the ability to effectively allow your energy to give off your base emotions. He has learned a variety of ways to intimidate his opponents, which add to his draconic persona.

His sense of morality is rather twisted, as well. While he finds sneak attacks and uneven odds to be absolutely deplorable, he is not above using them if the time calls for it. He is also abhorrent to people who murder others, but is capable of doing so without batting an eyelash. This may be contributed to his own firm belief in maintaining peace, but this in itself is counteracted by his want for more interesting events to happen.

Physical Appearance

Aeon has the appearance of a young, 19 year-old man. With white-silver hair, reaching to his shoulders in framing mopping locks and deep sapphire-colored eyes, he is considered to be quite handsome by the general populace. He is of slightly average height, being around 5'6" overall. His build is a bit thin on the surface, but he has a fair amount of muscle do to his training.

Biographical Information
Aeon was born to a young woman named Satsuki Honda by the name of Keichi Jr., who birthed the boy at the ripe age of 16. His father, Keichi Jinchiro, was not like many; he stayed with the girl, willing to throw away his chances of social activity to be with the mother of his child. Both not even 21, they made sure to balance their work and school with their baby. Satsuki made to quit high school and pursue online courses, while Keichi Sr. decided to work.

Keichi Sr. was a very workaholic man, trying his damnedest to provide for his family. He would often spend nearly 10 to 12 hours at work, with only a day or two of breaks. Tragedy struck when the boy's father was found dead in the streets of Hanagima Town, a neighboring city on the border of the family's. News of his passing was a complete shock to Satsuki and her son, who had turned five. It impacted both of them hard, Satsuki becoming chronically depressed. She found solace in alcohol, which led to nearly three years of nightly intoxication.

The woman found herself bringing men home in the dead of night, often leaving young Keichi by himself. There was one man in particular whom he did not enjoy; that being a man naming himself Aeon. Around his mother, he was a kind and caring individual; but frequently beat and harassed the boy when she was nowhere in sight. Keichi was often forced to blame this on stairs or bullies. His mother was none the wiser.

It wasn't long before she caught on, however. After coming home from a night of drinking, she witnessed the man raping the boy; having him pinned to the ground and ravaging him. This prompted her into a rage, causing her to kill the man with a coup de grâce from a firearm she kept. The woman embraced her son, promising to never leave him alone again. The broken ties, however, were never to be fixed.

It was only two years later that Keichi walked into the street, accidentall getting hit by a speeding car. Word of his death reached his mother, who in despair committed suicide. As a soul, he wandered the streets to find his mother. This was when he encountered a hollow, being attacked and very nearly turned. The boy was saved by a Shinigami, who stopped the hollowfication mid-process.

When asked his name, only one face was prominent in his head. "Aeon..."

Over his years in Rukongai, Aeon was subjected to many things; including torture and near slaughter. Taken in for experimentation by several Shinigami scientists, he was forced a pill that doubled his spiritual power from its original state. The pill was meant to test whether it would kill him or not, so as to give it to several regular Shinigami for battle purposes. This would be quite the opposite, granting the boy an entirely separate existence.

Ryuuza.

Now, he spends his days at work; researching and working on multiple techniques for his fighting styles. As the Captain of Squad 11 of the Gotei 13, he works to defend and protect.

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Zanpakutō

Name
Ryuuza

Zanpakutō Spirit

Ryuuza is a beautiful woman-dragon hybrid, sporting long hair that flows in the wind and strong scales. Her tail is thick and armor-clad, allowing for maximum defensive and offensive power. She is adept at the ability of utilizing lightning. Her personality is that of a rather serious and imperturbable totalitarian. She believes herself to be the guardian of Aeon, and is dreadfully jealous and abhorrent toward any woman coming near him.

She has a resemblance to Aeon's late mother.

Sealed Form

Ryuuza, in its sealed state, is an enormous 65 inch nodachi.



Shikai

Description
Ryuuza's Shikai takes the form of a pure, glowing white blade. This blade is encircled with lightning-like energy that crackles every so often.

Call Out Phrase
Raze the Skies

Ability
Ryuuza has the ability to control the skies, more specifically; to create rain, wind and lightning. Her energy is potent enough to cause storm-clouds, which fuel her powers. Rain and wind are derivatives of her sky-based powers, which allow her to utilize different powers. Lightning is her most liberally used technique.

Techniques

• Lightning Bolt
  
  Lightning Bolt is a broad category of techniques that is usable by Aeon. All of the bolts are very powerful, as well as being extremely fast.
  
  • Crafted From Sword - A lightning bolt generated from the sword. It has the sheer destructive power capable of destroying two story buildings.
    
  • Crafted From Skies - A lightning bolt generated from the skies. It has the destructive power to destroy a four story building and rip the ground asunder.
    
  • Crafted From Stormclouds - A red bolt of lightning dropped from storm clouds. It is essentially more powerful than the other two, having more precision and speed. The sheer power destroys seven to eight story buildings.
  
  
  
• Zephyr Bolt
  
  Aeon's most used technique. Zephyr Bolt is a blue lightning bolt that is fired from the blade. It is double the power of the Lightning Bolt variants, and has a speed that is quite literally double that as well. This can only be performed once stormclouds are at the height of their electrical surge.
  
  
  
• Gale Strike
  
  Aeon unleashes a blade of wind that is capable of slicing through metal. The wind is brought by circulating oxygen around Ryuuza, summoning a wind pressure that follows the axis of the rotation. This wind pressure is given meta-solidity by the lightning of his blade, allowing him to fire a continuous shockwave of wind.
  
  
  
• Ryuujin Youkai
  
  Aeon swings his blade, causing a blast of lightning that works similarly to Gale Strike. He simply circulates the wind fast enough to generate lightning once again.
  
  
  
• Bolt Mimicry
  
  Using his lightning, Aeon can create a solidified clone. This clone attacks his enemies, but possess only a fraction of the strength he does. They are destroyed by simply applying enough force that would normally cut or bludgeon him.
  
  

Bankai

Bankai Name
Enrai Ryuuza Hirameku

Description

Aeon's Bankai is quite possibly his most fearsome ability. Not known by many, he decidedly keeps this hidden as much as possible due to the overwhelming power.

Aeon, quite literally, summons forth the entire Enrai Ryuuza Hirameku dragon. The dragon is black in coloration, with glowing white eyes and claws that can rip through titanium. Its teeth is jagged and powerful, supported by abnormally strong jaw muscles. Ryuuza gains horns that she uses to generate lightning clouds, which appear when Enrai Ryuuza Hirameki comes into being. The dragon, itself, is very large, towering above nearly 60 feet in length; with 44 feet in height.

Ability
Enrai Ryuuza Hirameki gains the ability to use all techniques that Aeon could in his Shikai form, though to an obviously much more powerful extent. In addition to this, it uses its own techniques that allow it to battle. Aeon gains another technique from this.

Techniques

Aeon

• Storm Armor
  
  Aeon gains the ability to summon Storm Armor. This armor allows him to resist many different types of attacks, as well as augment his own. In addition to this, it also serves as the catalyst for Enrai Ryuuza Hirameki. This armor is also the biggest downside to Aeon, as once it breaks; the dragon disappears and his Bankai dissipates.
  
  
  Enrai Ryuuza Hirameki
  
• Rainstorm
  
  Causes a rainstorm that augments the power and effectiveness of the lightning bolts.
  
  
  
• Tornado
  
  The winds begin to circulate, causing tornadoes to appear in the area. They are much more powerful than garden variety tornadoes, and rip apart nearly any surface it touches. The tornadoes can be given bladed winds, which add to their deadliness.
  
  
  
• Hurricane
  
  The most powerful technique in Aeon and Enrai's arsenal. Using wind pressure and stormclouds, the dragon circulates water and builds it up slowly. As the Hurricane is powering, Enrai must allow it to grow on its own. The longer Enrai takes while powering it, the more powerful the hurricane is once it is unleashed. The attack brings the fullest extent of Aeon's power; a massive flood, deadly wind pressure, and lightning strikes.
  
  The dragon disappears immediately after use of Hurricane, no matter how powerful.

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Inner Hollow

Name
Oean

• Pronounced, oh-ān

Personality
In personality, Oean is the exact opposite of Aeon. She is rather murderous and unfeeling, but is also outgoing. Unlike many Hollow Spirits, Oean genuinely cares for Aeon, but chooses to attack and provoke him. She is absolutely merciless and indiscriminate in who he attacks.

Appearance
Image Reference. What she is made to be is showing what Aeon feels on the inside; weak in appearance, but with an overwhelming desire to protect himself with his own power.

Hollow Mask
Image Reference. The mask itself is made to look like a dragon with its eyes closed. This references to Aeon's not remembering his own name.

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Role-Play Sample

Spoiler:

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ADV-1

Hankou: 10
Reiryoku: 10
Hakudo: 15
Seijuu: 10
Bukijuu: 15
Hoho: 15

I've finished.

You asked about a Visored being a Soul Society Shinigami earlier... is this character a captain or lieutenant?

I wanted him to be a captain. Is that possible?

If not, I'll gladly become a Lieutenant. Or even something like Shinji.

Yes, you can be a captain. What squad? And include those details in your profile please. ^^

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Now, he spends his days at work; researching and working on multiple techniques for his fighting styles. As the Captain of Squad 11 of the Gotei 13, he works to defend and protect.

Added ^^

I believe she meant you should add Rank and Squad, after the Age.

Ex:

Rank: Captain

Squad: Division 11

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Age
166

• Died at age 15.
  
• Spent 112 years in Soul Society until the present day.
  
  • Shinigami Captain, Squad 11

Like that?

take a look at some of the accepted shinigami profiles to see what he means

Oop, derp.

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Squad
11

Rank
Captain

Approved for ADV-1 with 80 points. Once these stat points are applied, this topic will be moved to approved.

I mean 75 points, not 80. >.<

Added the stats.

You're five points above. You should be at 75, but you're at 80.

Aaaand, edited.

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"Combat isn't the basis of warfare; stupidity is."
- [b]Taichou no  Jūichibantai[/b]

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