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PostSubject: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Fri Nov 16, 2012 7:58 pm

Name:Jacky Sill - -Adrian Sill
[Has Dissociative Identity Disorder]
Nickname: Will normally go by Jack, Jacky, or John, whether it's Jacky or Adrian
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Weapon(s):Butterfly knife
Personality: Jacky Sill
Jack is a good guy. Honestly really sweet, and loving. He knows when a situation calls for action, and knows when not to rush in. But that's a bout it. He loses himself in his thoughts constantly. He gets distant. He's quite uneducated, no matter how well he can enunciate. Even then most of his sentences are short, choppy and sound almost as if he's not playing with a full deck of cards. Eventually He can muster up a quite interesting sentence, though it's rare that it's him.

Still Jack's been through a lot. And hasn't come out much worse for wear. Abused. Slashed a few times, and still not bitter. In fact his body isn't in terrible shape. Still, no one ever really knows what goes on inside his head.


Adrian
Adrian... Adrian is a bitter piece of work. Everything Jack is, Adrian isn't. Everything Adrian is, Jack isn't. Polar opposites. Adrian just about hates the world, and ridicules it within the confines of the body he shares. He speaks eloquently, and completely, as though he is of high class. He's an opportunist though. Still, one thing he does know is how to push his body to the limit. He's cynical. Though he's not maniacal. His hatred has limits.. It's not like he'd ever kill to many people for personal gain..


Physical Appearance:[x]

Jack has a rather athletic build. His body is toned, though one wouldn't say he's beefy, or buff. His hair is of medium length, and sways quite a bit. It's usually a dark brown color, though days out in the sun can bleach it for short periods of time. His right eye is usually bright green, while the left switches between a bright shade of hazel, and a dark shade of green, although strangely enough, there are occasions, usually when Adrian burst forth, that both eyes turn a dark blue. His skin isn't tanned very much, though he isn't pale. Sort of just a drab tone. He has a sort of charm about him, not to rough on the eyes.

Bio: It's extremely hard for Jack to remember much of his past. He is always told by Adrian that their father was locked away inside an insane asylum because he always would claim that he saw ghost, ones that attacked his wife, and plagued her with a curse. Adrian also always tells Jack that it's his fault Adrian shares his mind, he was supposed to a be a twin brother, but Jack absorbed him back into his body. Always said that he paid Jack back by giving him that mental strain. Jack's mom died giving birth to him, which, is just more that Adrian blames on Jacky. Jacky was passed from foster home to foster home, until he turned about 6, when he was diagnosed as autistic. No one wanted him after that. He was stuck in orphanages and left there.

Adrian only started to appear when Jacky turned about 15, until then, Jacky was usually on his own. Murmurs that he didn't think were his were all he got until then.

About the age of 10 though, the caretakers of the orphanages noticed something truly spectacular about Jacky. He was, somehow intelligent more than they were. Hey had trouble speaking, and thinking, but when they put something in front of him, it would be done. Problems they gave him would be finished quickly, math left for higher leveled people he could do with pencil and paper. It took other forms too, musically. Every now and again people would play songs or recite poems for the small children of the orphanage he could memorize them. One day, when one left his recorder to attend to a child, Jacky swiped it and sat. He played a small sour note, which drew the caretakers attention. Before he was scolded, his hands found the position and he began to play it away, just as the musician before him, each note perfect, for the exact amount of time until the song was done. It was amazing.

Then Adrian came at age 15. Jacky could feel this presence rummaging through his mind, picking at his thoughts. He could hear a voice speaking to him, asking if he could come out to speak with Jacky. It freaked him out, though he kept it quiet, his little secret. Jack didn't understand what it truly was until Adrian broke through four months later. There was a blare, and Jack felt like his skull was splitting apart, the words "LET ME OUT!" Being screamed inside his head. Finally he broke through and out came Adrian, who began to gather items, and set things up so that he could leave soon. It wasn't as easy as he had hoped, and eventually Jack did take control over. It kept like that for a long time, until Jacky turned 16. Adrian collected spare parts around the broken down orphanage and began focusing, on objects from his parents. His favorites were his two bracelets, that he wore constantly. To the caretakers they just took it as a toy gun. When Adrian played he went pew, pew, and mimicked a child, though in reality, he understood the power, and knew how to channel it into the weapon to control his spiritual energy. Jacky had no clue until he played with it, and accidentally shot a blast and broke half the orphanage. They didn't know what happened, but they sent everyone away. Jacky actually found a home, thanks to Adrian. Adrian played sweet, and innocent, and held some intelligence to show that he wasn't completely disabled. He was taken in by a sweet old man, whose health had been dwindling.

And there is where the two stand today, as 18 year olds in high school.

Fullbring

Name: Raito and Kunou
Item: Bracelets
Appearance: Raito [x] Kunou [x]
Ability: Kunou - the left Bracelet can transform into a pistol, capable of firing Reishi
Raito utilizes Reishi Control. Jacky's form can grip spiritual energy and give it form. However, this can't become anything ranges, as the spirit particles only stay bonded through the energy that radiates from Jacky's hands.
Both Bracelets are required for Spirit Break
Spirit Break - Jacky's form dissolves into Reishi, letting him move at insane speeds, and cause high amounts of spiritual damage. This form is short however, only lasting 2 post after the initial start post, (unless something is done during, in which case it's just one post after) and his form will reconstitute, and he will be left, exhausted and on the brink of unconsciousness.

Techniques: Reishi Shot, Reishi Weapons
Spirit Break Techniques
Flash - Creates an flash of white to blind
Break - Jacky's form is Reishi, and as such he can dissolve and rebind his particles together
Blast - Jacky can fire his reishi from his body in beams
Grow - Jacky can gather free reishi to grow bigger and stronger
Light dash - Light can move at higher speeds to get around the field Can be done 3 times before reconstitution

Role-play sample:
http://bleachoblivion.canadian-forum.com/t586-takeshima-kunou#13984
[ADV-3] Sample

Statistics - [ADP-0]
Hankou - 10
Reiryoku - 10
Hakudo - 8
Seijuu - 10
Bukijuu - 10
Hoho - 12
TSP - 60
[x]


Shima Kunou ADV-3--------------Jacky & Adrian Sill ADP-0
H - R - H - S - B - H -------------- H - R - H - S - B - H
5 -10 - 5 - 15 - 15- 15--------------8-10-10-10-10-12


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:14 pm

You might want to explicitly state this character has a personality disorder.

Also, it sounds more like you've made a Fullbringer than a Human, is that the case or no? Basically, can you you clarify the race of the character?


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:28 pm

It looks like I've made a fullbringer.


Shima Kunou ADV-3--------------Jacky & Adrian Sill ADP-0
H - R - H - S - B - H -------------- H - R - H - S - B - H
5 -10 - 5 - 15 - 15- 15--------------8-10-10-10-10-12
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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:59 pm

I see, well it'd be a good idea to switch to the Fullbring template; also, gotta state in his bio somewhere that his mother was attacked by a hollow.

Also if you like, you can try for a rank aside from an ADP.


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:21 pm

Complete!


Shima Kunou ADV-3--------------Jacky & Adrian Sill ADP-0
H - R - H - S - B - H -------------- H - R - H - S - B - H
5 -10 - 5 - 15 - 15- 15--------------8-10-10-10-10-12
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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:34 pm

Exactly how fast does Spirit Break let him move? Is it on par with Shinigami Shunpo or an Arrancar's Sonido? Also something like that should really only be limited to two posts, meaning you would have to alter Grow or remove it completely.

Also, are you sticking with the ADP-0 rank?


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:39 pm

Well, the fullbringers already have a move like shunpo.
So it's faster than shunpo, and grow, I guess could have the lengthening removed
The thing about his speed is, he can't really damage when he moves that fast.
When he moves to fast his form changes, so he isn't allowed to damage, only move, unless it's at the lower speeds, like shunpo speeds
He isn't really a solid being since he's made of energy.


Shima Kunou ADV-3--------------Jacky & Adrian Sill ADP-0
H - R - H - S - B - H -------------- H - R - H - S - B - H
5 -10 - 5 - 15 - 15- 15--------------8-10-10-10-10-12
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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 5:35 pm

I see..I think..It's a little confusing.


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:11 pm

Well,, can I not have it now get approved and have him work for it later and approve or not do the Spirit break?


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:38 pm

It's the speed thing that I'm having issue with, but maybe if you put a limit as to how many times he can use that super speed per battle I'd be comfortable.

I also wanna make sure you're keeping your ADP rank, I can approve it for the rank it is, but I want to make sure it's the rank you want.


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:43 pm

Well, how about five times for the speed, within those two post.

And I'm sure it's the one I want.


Shima Kunou ADV-3--------------Jacky & Adrian Sill ADP-0
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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:51 pm

How about three times? Five is a little much.

Alright, then once the adjustment is made this will be moved to accepted.


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 7:06 pm

Done


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PostSubject: Re: Jacky & Adrian Sill [Fullbringer] - done   Sun Nov 25, 2012 7:13 pm

~Moving to accepted~


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